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Jaden Frazier 812

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      Waldo is a kid who is different than most in this book. His mom was raped by a soldier. So now kids call him rude and horrible names. The title of this book is The Sort Of Dark Mage by Nelson  Chereta, Waldo is treated as a outcast because of his mixed blood it is not fair.

    In this story Waldo is treated differently because of his mixed heritage and how he looks. Waldo is harassed by his mom because of his dad. Waldo says “I don’t belong anywhere”, You can find this on page 50.  As he try’s to fit in with everyone. Waldo Is called the red devil because he has red hair and his people were supposed to be monsters in battle.
 In this story Waldo is a outcast because of his mixed blood. Plus the fact that he was a bastard child.In the world that Waldo lives in everyone hates his people. The world that Waldo lives in is not fair 

against his people even the children. The people treat Waldo's people like monsters. On page 45 Waldo goes to play with other small little kids and the moms pull the kids away from Waldo. Waldo through out his life has been treated like a monster even when he was a small kid.